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Dear Smoldering Wick:hibye:,

I hope you don't mind if I start a thread to make comments on your writing.:hug: I don't want to disturb the writing and like your creative writings, as I do many of other people's creative thoughts, writings, research:love:

I would like to start on the journal entry where a man needs a hug. Huge vulnerability for a guy. I take the role of the wife who feels her husband is disingenuous, I can really relate. I have lumped flaws and faults where I feel that someone wouldn't have done those things if they really loved me. This is an amazingly hard obstacle to overcome.

Sleeping like a log reminds me of having to gather firewood or move logs to the sled on the snowmobile. Now, if you gathered wood like many of the country generations before me and are around children, you under stand when a child is in a deep and you carry them like a log or firewood. Deep sleep has the most "dead" "heavy" feeling than when you pick up an awake, active child. Add the fact that children get heavier, they are associated with a log. Another sleep wood analogy occurred in my home. My step dad snores loud and the expression is that he's sawing wood. My step dad was a lumberjack for a period of his life, so I don't know if my family was influenced by loggers(?). I'm sure we were because logging is in my family.The last few generations of loggers that didn't have all the machinery that they do things with now.

Nice visiting:giverose:

With Sis Love, Debbie
Dear Smoldering Wick:hibye:,

I just wrote a post that made me cry before I finished so I erased it. Its gray and stormy looking, today. The girls and I got in a nature walk, though:cheer: Trying to make some use of workout looking clothes. I'm getting OK with the Heeley shoes, too. I wear the guy's dark blue. My youngest daughter is working on becoming part of the Heeley team. I am happy she has an interest, one to inspire her. Its always fun to have some fun things to entertain us in life.

So, I'm a big magazine reader (at DR's offices and check out lines-I don't buy because our budget it too tight) I used to buy fashion magazines in my younger days as a splurge. If I'm marketing something, I will usually splurge on a magazine for inspiration, add books from the library and the internet and I can usually find creative venues.

So, how about considering me as an agent, someday. Remember, I asked first.;) I could use the money, so send me a PM and maybe we can start with something small. This one is great for a magazine article. I think women would really absorb the male intimacy of the mind for this piece.

I'm never going to be your number one fan, so no misery needed. I just like your talent.:heartbeat:

With Sis Love, Debbie

Ontheedge Wrote:
Another sleep wood analogy occurred in my home. My step dad snores loud and the expression is that he's sawing wood.

Dear Debbie :hibye:,

Just to clarify, the names in the diary were changed to protect the guilty, not the innocent. As for logs being sawn, I am not guilty of snoring despite audible protests otherwise. And just so you know this entire subject will remain subjective until further notice! :thumbup::funnyface::giverose:

Brotherly affection,

sw

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